Debate-Whip speech

19 Jan

Hello ladies and gentlemen, and honorable judges! My name is Jung Ye Won, the opposition whip. Our team believes that Globalization does not improves quality of life. The world had entered an age of globalization. As many countries are quickly opening the country to be part of globalization, there are many disadvantages and dark side of it.

As a opposition whip, I’ll rebut the government side’s arguments. Their first argument was…………………

Our team’s first argument was first… and they didn’t rebutted for this point so they lose this point. Here, the DPM rebutted but it is wrong because………….

There was a main clashes about this point that………..but our argument is more clear and logical because…………………………

For these reasons, we strongly believe that globalization does not improves the quality of life. Thank you.

Debate- Whip’s role

18 Jan
  1. A brief introduction about this topic ( to clear our team’s claim)
  2. Rebuttal! to other team’s arguments
  3. Summarize the arguments( rebuild our arguments by check rebuttals and do rebut)
  4. An outline of debate’s major clashes( Why we won of this clashes)
  • Tip( example)
  1. Korea is now…
  2. I’ll rebut the Opposition team’s arguments. Their first argument was….
  3. Our team’s argument was first,/…./ and they didn’t rebutted for this point, so they lose this point
  4. There was a major clashes about this point that… But our team’s claim is more clear and logical…
  5. I’ll rebut the Opposition team’s arguments. Their first argument was….

Some American kids don’t like K-Pop!!

18 Jan

Dear American kids,

Hello American kids, I’m Jung Ye Won, live in South Korea. I saw this video, and it was really shock. Maybe you guys were born in America, number one country, which is very rich and advanced, so you are too rude and lack of open mind to understand different cultures. These days the world are changing into Globalization ages. If you don’t have an open mind to accept and understand new cultures, your country might not survive in this phenomenon. I think you should say sorry to us about the fact that you said ” They are more like following American Culture”, or ” They are too weird”. Well, I think you guys are weird, too.  Well, I’m not a fan of Girl’s Generation, Super Junior and 2ne1, but you are ignoring the human being of K-pop stars. I hope you realized and learn to know your rude attitude for doing this. Bye.

Reflective Essay: In response to “Spring”

18 Jan

In class, we watched the first chapter “Spring” in Kim Ki Duk’s film “Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter, Spring.”

‘Spring’ This was a short story about a boy who learned legend by one event. A boy and a monk lived together in a Buddhist temple, far from the land. One day, boy did tricks to animals (fish, frog, and snake) by wind thread on the live animals and on the other side, he put a rock. A wise monk saw this and punished him by putting a rock on his back, and don’t lose it until he free the animals. Boy went back, but almost all of the animals died.

I had a similar experience with a boy. When I was eight, I got goldfish present from my grandpa. My mom bought me fish food and Korean Bowl to feed them well. I was very thank for these presents so at first days, I fed them very well. I always give 3 fish food to each, everyday. However, as time pass and pass, I kept forgot to give food and if I remember to give food, I gave them too much. One day, the event happened. I had 7 gold-fish but two of them died. Also, it was winter so the bowl is out of balcony, so I keep forgetting. Time passed, and most of goldfish died. When all of the goldfish died, I was so sad, feel sorry to my grandpa and mother, and regret why I didn’t feed them. It was sad, but it was more sad of punishment. The punishment was no pets until I show my parents responsibility. I think I was too young to learn responsibility or respect animals’ being.

I think a boy’s punishment is too harsh because a boy is only 5 or 6 years but teach him by tying heavy rope in his back and show him how the animals died. Sure, the wise monk knew the animals will die, then he should let them to go, but he just put them dying and make a boy to see it and bury them. I think when a boy become older, this way of teaching is good, but he is only 5 to 6 years old, so it is bad. I think my punishment for my wrong action is okay because it is hard to show parents responsibility and while I practice to show responsibility, I have to think carefully always. ‘Spring’ was a good movie to enjoy, and have a good day~!

Whacky Web Tales!

13 Jan

An Odd Animal

The Odd Oddy is an animal that has rainbow fur with sparkling emerald spots on its Fingers and toes. Its tail is shaped like a(n) house which it uses to running children. An adult Odd Oddy may weigh more than 7 pounds and stand over 14 feet high.

The Odd Oddy can be found only in South Korea and Australia. Although its favorite food is cream spaghetti, it also likes to eat men. If you ever see a(n) Odd Oddy, be sure not to ever sing “anything.” That song makes it happy. Instead, give it a few cream spaghetti and be on your way.

Dear Diary

Dear Diary,

Today was the most exciting day at school! Amy didn’t speak to me all day. I seriously forgot my homework for math class. My new friend Bob isn’t talking to me anymore. And to top it all off, I forgot my lunch, so I had to borrow money to buy lunch. I hate borrowing money, I hate forgetting my homework, and I hate it when my friends don’t talk to me! WoW!! I hope tomorrow is a better day!

Dear Diary,

Everything was much better today. Amy wasn’t mad at me; she was just upset because her parents would not let her go to a party. She was enjoying toward everyone. My math teacher said she’d only take one point off my homework because this was the only time I’d ever forgotten anything. She said everyone makes pretty mistakes sometimes. My new friend Bob is talking to me. He was just busy helping out a sick friend. He had to gather all of his friend’s homework. My friend who loaned me the money for lunch yesterday said I didn’t have to pay him back, because I had loaned him money for lunch a while ago. I hope every day is a good as today!

Debate- Government side

12 Jan

This house believes that immigration is bad for Korea.

Korea is now changing into multiculturalism country. The best example showing Korea is changing is the borderless village in Wongok-dong, Danwon-gu, Ansan-si, Gyeonggi-do, Korea. According to the Kyunghyang Shimun, in 2011, now, the immigrations are seemed to be 1.4 million and in Ansan, there are 40 thousand immigrats from 62 countries. Especially, in Wongok-dong, there are Chinese, Vietnam, Indonesians, Bangladeshi, Thais, Filipinos, and so on. Most of them are working on small companys which have less than 100 workers, which mean they are low income workers.

This was an brief introduction facts that show us how many immigrants are in Korea. Now, I’ll rebut the government side. Their first  argument was…..

Also, during the opposition side’s rebuttal, they said …. but it’s not true because…..

  Our team’s argument is first, there are some cultural problems. Other countries’ cloth, food, language and all of the cultural things can cause problems. For example, even though there is Korean language ‘어묵’, many people are using ‘오뎅’. Also, if there are too many restarunts by immigrations, the Korean resteraunt will decrease or gone. Second, immigrants who are temporary workers bring decrease in economy of Korea. It needs money to train workers properly. Also, in long term, temporar workers bring low productivity. Finally, many illegal immigrants cause some problems. They create illegality culture. They use resources without contributing to our country. Also, the possibility is high to commit crime.

 

Meta Fiction

12 Jan

  Amy is a student who goes to elementary school, in Seoul. She is just an normal student however, because of her low score, she got stress a lot. She was so stressed about the score, she wanted to imagine that in the future, there will be no score results and she hoped there will be no students that is stressed about the scores like her. She was getting more stressed everyday, and every time friends or parents talk about the scores. In one day, her school teacher announced there will be a speech contest, so every one should do it. Because of this, she thought a lot, and finally, she decided to do speech about ‘The future’ which is the world with no scores or bad results. She practiced it every night and every day. The time passed, and it became the day of speech contest. She stand in front of all of the people, cleared her throat, and started her speech.

” In the future, it will be all changed. There will be underwater railway or cars by electricity. People will fly around, or riding flying motorcycle. In the morning, busy, so people will eat not breakfast but just a small medicine that makes people energetic and all nutrients are in this medicine. Also, their cloths will look so fashionable that a clothes’ color don’t only have rainbow colors, but strange colors which makes just shiny. They’ll go company by 2 seconds by riding new invention.

In the noon, people need food, too. It is easy to eat food. There is a robot. You click what you want to eat. 1 minute later, food comes out of the robot’s stomach. The chair is able to change the temperature of it. Next, they do exercise. There is a machine you can do jump rope without ropes. Your calory decrease severely.

In the evening, people will clicking robot’s stomach. Why? They are choosing what they want to eat. Umm..Let’s see Mr.G’s house. He clicked bulgogi pizza. He loves pizza, and he will get that pizza after 5 minutes.

Next, let’s move on to Miss. Sung’s house. Wow! She chose 2 glasses of milk and 100 grams of salad. Maybe, that’s why she is so beautiful and thin. Now, almost every people finished dinner. It’s time for extra work. It’s time for extra work. Perhaps, this is the most exciting time in daily schedule. Everybody enjoys this time. They do their work.

People enjoys work, students study at that time. What’s our homework today? Well, I don’t have to remember hard. Memory machine will help us. Also, after it remembered, I’ll just put it in the homework machine and it will do it all by itself. There is no scores or results also. Everyone is happy in the future,and they always have big smile on their face.”

After her speech, everyone clapped and give a great cheer. Everyone in the room enjoyed it and love it. Of course, Amy became the best speaker and got the best award. She is very confident now, and she became the best speaker while she goes to middle school, high school and even university.

History-3nd Presentation

11 Jan

Hello everyone~! My name is Jung Ye Won. Today, I’d like to tell you about the American civil wars.

Before I start my speech I’m introduce you my contents. First, I’m going to tell you the civil war-time line, second about Yankee doodle and the rebels, and finally, the food soldiers eat during the civil war.

In 1808, writer William Jenks says ” The northern states will fight the southern states and the fight will be about slavery…The northern states will defeat the exhausted southern states in a war that lasts four years…After the war we will have a new United States of America…” All these things will come true 53 years later when Jenks is long dead. He gets one fact a little wrong… Can you guess what is wrong??? The answer is he said ” This war will begin in 1856!” but the war actually began in 1861, but the violence started in… guess when??

Before I tell you this answer, I’m going to introduce you what is American Civil War. According to http://www.history.com, in the spring of 1861, decades of simmering tensions between the northern and southern United States over issues including states’ rights versus federal authority, westward expansion and slavery exploded into the American Civil War (1861-65). The election of the anti-slavery Republican Abraham Lincoln as president in 1860 caused seven southern states to secede from the Union to form the Confederate States of America; four more joined them after the first shots of the Civil War were fired. Four years of brutal conflict were marked by historic battles. By the time it ended in Confederate surrender in 1865, the Civil War proved to be the costliest war ever fought on American soil, with some 620,000 of 2.4 million soldiers killed, millions more injured and the population and territory of the South devastated.

This was a brief summary of American Civil War, and now I’m going to tell you the Civil War timeline. To understand civil war timeline, you have to know one very important person, and it’s John Brown. According to Who2 Biographies, John Brown is a famous figure in the fight over slavery that led up to the American Civil War. In 1856, the people of Missouri State wanted to keep slaves and they attack Kansas which can’t make up its mind. The famous John Brown hated slavers. He hacked the Missouri attackers to pieces, saying he was backed by Almighty God. So, the answer of above answer is 1856. In 1859, John Brown attacks US Army at Harper’s Ferry in Virginia. Slaves don’t rise to support him so he is caught and hanged. In 1860, Abraham Lincoln is elected 16th President – he’s going to ban slavery and the Rebels in the south won’t like that! In 1861, war starts when Rebels attack Fort Sumter, South Carolina. In 1862, Desperate Rebels force men to join their army while President Lincoln says ‘All slaves are free!’Black slaves run off to join Lincoln’ but the whites don’t want to fight with them. In 1863, Rebels lose their best general, ‘Stone wall’ Jackson when he is accidentally shot by his own men! When the southern Rebels try to invade the north they are crushed at ‘Gettysburg’ and will not recover. In 1864, 7000 men die in just 20 minutes of fighting at ‘Cold Harbor’. General Sherman’s northern forces start their devastating ‘March to the Sea’ to destroy the southern Rebels. In 1865, the Rebels allow black slaves to fight with them but the ungrateful people jeer and spit at the black soldiers. The Rebels surrender in April but less than a week later President Lincoln is assassinated by an actor, John Wilkes Booth.

Now I’m moving on to second small topic, Yankee doodle and the rebels. The people of the north called themselves Billy Yank.(Hank Yank would have been more fun but the swanky Yankees were serious about their hanky panky.) Where did the word ‘Yank” come from? Well, the old British settlers had sneered at the Dutch settlers in New York. They thought these cheese-making Dutch people were a joke. They called any Dutchman ‘John Cheese’ and the Dutch for John Cheese is ‘Jan Kees’ – pronounced Yankees! The name stuck to northern Americans like Edam cheese sticks to your granny’s false teeth. Northern Americans became Jan Kees or Yankees. The people of the south wanted to rebel against the Billy Yanks so they called themselves Johnny Rebels or Johnny Rebs for short. (because it’s easier to spell).

Finally, I’ll tell you about the way soldiers  eat during civil war. First, they ate chicken soup. Most soldiers hate the hospital food, especially chicken soup- which they nickname ‘shadow soup’. Here’s how they said it was made.. First, a chicken is hung up in the sun where its shadow would fall into the cooking pot. Second, water is put into the cooking pot and the shadow is boiled. Finally, salt, pepper and other spices are added to make it taste of something and it is served out. The second food was beetle bread.  The bread is usually so hard it has to be softened by dipping it into coffee. The warm wet coffee loosens up the beetles that have made a home in it. The soldiers nickname their bread ‘worm castles’. Finally, they was feast on fruit. Soldiers have to grab food when they have a chance. At the Battle of Blackburn’s Ford the Yankee soldiers were being smashed by Rebs. Their Yankee friends ate the back should have rushed to help them but they were too busy picking black berries!!

It was very sad and felt sorry to soldiers. The soldiers had given their lives to fight in civil war, eat strange things, but they fought so now there is peaceful land USA. I think Civil war was very important part of history and I enjoyed to learn about this important war.

History- preparing for 3rd presentation

11 Jan

 

1. Building Background

-1.What is American Civil War?-> According to Wikipedia, the American Civil War (1861–1865) was a civil war fought in the United States of America. In response to the election of Abraham Lincoln as President of the United States, 11 southern slave states declared their secession from the United States and formed the Confederate States of America (“the Confederacy”); the other 25 states supported the federal government (“the Union”). After four years of warfare, mostly within the Southern states, the Confederacy surrendered and slavery was outlawed everywhere in the nation. Issues that led to war were partially resolved in the Reconstruction Era that followed, though others remained unresolved.

2. Summary of American Civil War

Date April 12, 1861 – April 9, 1865 (last shot fired June 22, 1865)
Location Southern United States, Northeastern United States, Western United States, Atlantic Ocean
Result Unionvictory

  • Territorial integrityof the United States of America preserved
  • Reconstruction
  • Slavery abolished

Chain writing- In the future

11 Jan

 

In the future, it will be all changed. There will be underwater railway or cars by electricity. People will fly around, or riding flying motorcycle. In the morning, busy, so people will eat not breakfast but just a small medicine that makes people energetic and all nutrients are in this medicine. Also, their clothe will look so fashionable that a clothes’ color don’t only have rainbow colors, but strange colors which makes just shiny. They’ll go company by 2 seconds by riding new invention.

 In the noon, people need food, too. It is easy to eat food. There is a robot. You click what you want to eat. 1 minute later, food comes out of the robot’s stomach. The chair is able to change the temperature of it. Next, they do exercise. There is a machine you can do jump rope without ropes. Your calory decrease severely.

  In the evening, people will clicking robot’s stomach. Why? They are choosing what they want to eat. Umm..Let’s see Mr.G’s house. He clicked bulgogi pizza. He loves pizza, and he will get that pizza after 5 minutes.

  Next, let’s move on to Miss. Sung’s house. Wow! She chose 2 glasses of milk and 100 grams of salad. Maybe, that’s why she is so beautiful and thin. Now, almost every people finished dinner. It’s time for extra work. It’s time for extra work. Perhaps, this is the most exciting time in daily schedule. Everybody enjoys this time. They do their work.

  People enjoys work, students study at that time. What’s our homework today? Well, I don’t have to remember hard. Memory machine will help us. Also, after it remembered, I’ll just put it in the homework machine and it will do it all by itself. Have a good night~!

My feeling after the Chain writing

Well, first of all, the story is absolutely going out of they way. I wanted to imagine and wrote about future life from morning to-night, but it became a story of other person. Second, the story is not focused and too massy. I can’t understand what it is about, too. Maybe friends understand it like a just daily life. Anyway, I think I should say thank you for my friends to participate on this essay.